this if is brilliant and im loving it so far! there are a few chunks of writing that feel a bit clunky but theyre such a minor thing and the story and characters are sooo good!! theres one issue right now where when ur choosing who to attack (vira, swordsman or rhiane), the options for the swordsman and rhian both take u to the same scene, attacking rhian. love the story and cant wait to see where u take it 💗 im an absolute sucker for angst so im an absolute sucker for ILYAAAA </3333 im invested!
The fight was SOO good omg loved it sm <3 I already know this will go into one of my fav IF. Author, take ur time !! I will be patiently waiting for chapter 2 :)
Felt like my comment wasn’t enough, this whole IF is a masterpiece, the writing and attention to details and environment is outstanding. The freedom we have with our character and how good the story and lore is just rahhhhh eats it all. So excited for future updates
I just finished playing the demo and I'm practically vibrating. The hold this story has on me is insane. I am feeling so many feelings, I love this so much. Five stars 10/10, will probably definitely be replaying this demo at least four times this week!!!!
Kind of short but it has a lot of potential. Unlike most stories on itch I've seen the pacing of this one is balanced, moves quickly and has an interesting world. There's action but not too much. Very balanced, very fun and the cliffhanger is pretty good. Bravo. Hope to get an update soon. This story would beat 99% of WIPS on the Choice of Games thread imo.
Have you read the intro for ROs? The description implied they're skilled fighters. And if you really process the story, you know our dear MC has constant headache there 😂. And looks like MC is only OP in the night. Day and sun shining? Skilled, yes, but not OP.
my problem is that the fight scene feels slow awkward and unsatisfying. not so much the fact that mc loses, but how they lose. also lunging at the swordsman and lunging at the random guy go down the same story path which makes no sense for the swordsman since it says "he has no weapon, he must be the easiest option right?" lol.
when we getting another chapter instead? yeah, its really good but it'll get boring if we just stayed with the old. though I guess you can't rush a masterpiece
Do you know when you'll have more out? This is amazing and didn't realize it was just a demo, I usually don't do demos cause all you want is more, when there isn't any.
LOVEEEE THE NEW UPDATE SCREAMING (more ilya content whybhwebhweeheheehehavdwsajdvghkafvhkedufeveguhkveghvASAHHH) SO WELL WRITTEN SUCH AN IMPROVMENT ON SOMETHING I ALREADY THOUGHT WAS PERFECT CANT WAIT FOR MORE
ahhhhhhhh I’m back here again!! Love this as always😭💕❤️❤️ and AJSHSJSJSJSJ I love the re-written chapter 1 so much!! And Vira scene is OML KAKSKSKSKSSKJS
Im equal parts glad and mad. I thought i was following this already bt decided to check up on some IF stories and saw it and realized there was an update lol so glad i did that. This is honestly a wonderful piece of writing and i look forward to so much more from such a talented writer. Thank u! 💜
An absolute gripping game, can't wait to see what happens next! (Ilya kinda cute tbh.... like i know they r a traitor n all but.... just a silly dude...)
the way that i was so hooked and immersed with the way the story goes that i was sadly begging more when i saw that it's a demo. i was in the zone with how the mc was feeling, like i was getting frustrated with them (which was the point bcos it's a reader-insert story). i can't wait to see how this story goes!
Loved the way the immersion felt so real and intense, especially with the betrayal and the feelings of frustration's MC had to go through. Excited to see how things shape out for the next chapter, and to see how MC will fare when nothing went to plan at all.
I am genuinely so excited to see this update and expand! I'm extremely bummed that I got here so early on in the building process, but I'm also kind of excited to watch as this thing grows with time and how the writing style changes! Super hyped to see where you take this story! Can't wait for more! Keep us the amazing work!
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I sincerely look forward to what is next! :)
A very good wip, tho I hope there will be a way to stay with the Court and not to make enemy of them
this if is brilliant and im loving it so far! there are a few chunks of writing that feel a bit clunky but theyre such a minor thing and the story and characters are sooo good!! theres one issue right now where when ur choosing who to attack (vira, swordsman or rhiane), the options for the swordsman and rhian both take u to the same scene, attacking rhian. love the story and cant wait to see where u take it 💗 im an absolute sucker for angst so im an absolute sucker for ILYAAAA </3333 im invested!
The fight was SOO good omg loved it sm <3 I already know this will go into one of my fav IF. Author, take ur time !! I will be patiently waiting for chapter 2 :)
Felt like my comment wasn’t enough, this whole IF is a masterpiece, the writing and attention to details and environment is outstanding. The freedom we have with our character and how good the story and lore is just rahhhhh eats it all. So excited for future updates
Is author back yet? one of my favourite WIPS, hope there's an update
So good!!! One of my favorite IFs!!!
screaming at how good this is. i NEED part two
pls tell me this is still bein worked on
On their tumblr they said they are still working on it.
No update yet? damn
I just finished playing the demo and I'm practically vibrating. The hold this story has on me is insane. I am feeling so many feelings, I love this so much. Five stars 10/10, will
probablydefinitely be replaying this demo at least four times this week!!!!Kind of short but it has a lot of potential. Unlike most stories on itch I've seen the pacing of this one is balanced, moves quickly and has an interesting world. There's action but not too much. Very balanced, very fun and the cliffhanger is pretty good. Bravo. Hope to get an update soon. This story would beat 99% of WIPS on the Choice of Games thread imo.
MC has shadow super powers and still loses to randoms because they're ROs. Hope we get to kill them later.
Or the powers arent super op in broad daylight, take a toll on MC and the RO's arent useless and skilled fighters?
Have you read the intro for ROs? The description implied they're skilled fighters. And if you really process the story, you know our dear MC has constant headache there 😂. And looks like MC is only OP in the night. Day and sun shining? Skilled, yes, but not OP.
Day time literally has more shadows than night time bro lol.
Can't agree more.
my problem is that the fight scene feels slow awkward and unsatisfying. not so much the fact that mc loses, but how they lose. also lunging at the swordsman and lunging at the random guy go down the same story path which makes no sense for the swordsman since it says "he has no weapon, he must be the easiest option right?" lol.
I love iiiit- I played it some months ago- but when is the next update ? It doesn't have anything new ;^;
this is funny, lmao
LMAO
Very good game.
:P
fixes this, additional previous content that
when we getting another chapter instead? yeah, its really good but it'll get boring if we just stayed with the old. though I guess you can't rush a masterpiece
And here i was hoping for new content nooo
._.)
OMG THIS IS SOOOO GOOD I LOVE IT!! CAN’T WAIT FOR CHAPTER TWO!!
I NEED MOREEE
THIS IS SO COOL I COULDN'T LOOK AWAY I NEED MORE AAAAGHGHGGAHSGHW
Do you know when you'll have more out? This is amazing and didn't realize it was just a demo, I usually don't do demos cause all you want is more, when there isn't any.
Any idea when the next update will be?
Do you have a discord server?
If yes can you post here the link pls
LOVEEEE THE NEW UPDATE SCREAMING (more ilya content whybhwebhweeheheehehavdwsajdvghkafvhkedufeveguhkveghvASAHHH) SO WELL WRITTEN SUCH AN IMPROVMENT ON SOMETHING I ALREADY THOUGHT WAS PERFECT CANT WAIT FOR MORE
Omg omg omg, I absolutely loved the original chapter 1 demo. But this version blew me right outta the water, it's so good! Keep up the amazing work!
ahhhhhhhh I’m back here again!! Love this as always😭💕❤️❤️ and AJSHSJSJSJSJ I love the re-written chapter 1 so much!! And Vira scene is OML KAKSKSKSKSSKJS
also, Hope you are doing well honey🥹💕💓
The nonbinary stuff isn't working
That weird, it seems to be working for me. Can you send me a screenshot of the error to either my Tumblr or discord?
Im equal parts glad and mad. I thought i was following this already bt decided to check up on some IF stories and saw it and realized there was an update lol so glad i did that. This is honestly a wonderful piece of writing and i look forward to so much more from such a talented writer. Thank u! 💜
Ohhh it’s So good!, nearly can’t wait for more.
THE ANGST!?!?! THE DEVELPOMENT?!?!?!? THIS IS A AMAZING AAAA
Update
Update
Update
Update
I cant waiiitttttt
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An absolute gripping game, can't wait to see what happens next! (Ilya kinda cute tbh.... like i know they r a traitor n all but.... just a silly dude...)
Whens the next update?
very soon, 20th of march, although it is only a rewrite of chapter one.
Its ok i dont mind replaying again
This is so well made
i wanna kiss Rhian on the mouth
it be like that
the way that i was so hooked and immersed with the way the story goes that i was sadly begging more when i saw that it's a demo. i was in the zone with how the mc was feeling, like i was getting frustrated with them (which was the point bcos it's a reader-insert story). i can't wait to see how this story goes!
Loved the way the immersion felt so real and intense, especially with the betrayal and the feelings of frustration's MC had to go through. Excited to see how things shape out for the next chapter, and to see how MC will fare when nothing went to plan at all.
I came back and play again lmao love your game!!😭💕💕💓 hope you are doing okay💓💓
They surprisingly made my blood boil, love it.
I am genuinely so excited to see this update and expand! I'm extremely bummed that I got here so early on in the building process, but I'm also kind of excited to watch as this thing grows with time and how the writing style changes! Super hyped to see where you take this story! Can't wait for more! Keep us the amazing work!